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As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Father's appearing was like a savior to the two children. Under the guidance of their father, they took positive actions and started all over again. They made the bread and then went on cooking pornidge. Father helped then adjust the fire, which was the key to sucess. It was all right this time. Delicious brealkfast was ready. How happy they were! The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her, she was very surprised. It was not only the gift, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. The two children could finish cooking a breakfast, which she didn't expect. The children said loudly,“Happy Mother's Day!" Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again
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【分析】本文以母亲节为线索展开,讲述了双胞胎Jena和Jef为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐, 自己动手, 做起饭餐来,但是不幸的是,他们连连失败,后来在父亲的帮助下,获得成功,他们把早餐献给亲爱的母 亲,妈妈非常感动的故事。 1.段落续写: ①由第- -段首句内容“当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时,他们的父亲出现了。”可知,第一段可描写他们的父 亲指导帮助他们准备早餐。 ②由第二段首内容“这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼上,叫醒了他们的母亲。”可知,第二段可描写母亲收到 孩子们的礼物早餐,非常感动。 2.续写线索:帮助- --指导- --积极一 献礼一 感动 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①帮助: help/assist ②.指导: guide/conduct ③.献礼: presant a gift/give a gift 情绪类 ①.积极: positive /positively/takle positive actions ②.感动: moved/ touched 【点睛】 [高分句型1]. Fathar helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. (which引导的非限制性定语从句 [高分句型2]. It was not only the brealfast, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. (使用not only..but (also)句型及强调句型)