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(满分25分) 假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括： 1.时间和地点； 2.内容：学习唐诗； 3.课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【考点】R1：提纲类．菁优网版权所有 【分析】本文是篇书信，要根据三点要求来完成，分别是 1．问候Leslie；2．告知下次上课的计划，内容包括：（1）时间和地点；（2）内容：学习唐诗；（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史．写作时要注意以下几点：1、写作内容涵盖所有要点，不可遗漏；2、要运用恰当的语气，委婉的表示拒绝，注意时态语态，避免出现语法和拼写错误；3、适当运用高级词汇和句型来为自己的文章增色． 【亮点说明】文章要点齐全，表达思路明确，知识点运用恰当到位，文中使用了非常好的短语和词汇为文章增色不少，比如1、唐诗：Tang poetry 2、唐朝的历史：the history of Tang dynasty等．还运用了一些从句使得文章结构更加严谨合理，如Besides，we are going to learn some basic rules about Tang poetry，which will be not only meaningful but also interesting．和 you'd better learn some history about the Tang dynasty，which can cultivate your interests and broaden your horizons．是非限制定语从句，也是一句长句等． 【解答】 Dear Leslie, How time flies! Next week, we are going to enjoy our next Chinese class. Are you ready? Now, I am writing to tell you some relevant details about it.（点明写信目的） To begin with, we can have the class on Monday evening in the school library, when there will be less people.（时间地点） Besides, we are going to learn some basic rules about Tang poetry, which will be not only meaningful but also interesting.（上课内容） （高分句型1）What’s more, you’d better learn some history about the Tang dynasty, which can cultivate your interests and broaden your horizons.（课前准备）（高分句型2） I have the confidence that we will have a great time. Looking forward to meeting you again! Yours, LiHua 【点评】提纲类在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需要积累短语和重要句型． 第PAGE1页（共NUMPAGES1页）