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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Emily Sanders, a 25-year-old from Detroit, Michigan, set out on December 23rd with high hopes of reaching Toronto to meet her boyfriend for Christmas. Although she had heard warnings about an approaching snowstorm, she didn’t give it much thought. She assumed that much like in Michigan, police would simply detour (使绕道) traffic around any closed sections of the highway. But that didn’t happen. As the snow came down more and more heavily, Emily was directed off the highway. She drove on for a while and found herself on an unfamiliar road toward a Canadian town. The blinding whiteout made driving nearly impossible. At one point, Emily’s car got stuck. After a struggle, she managed to free the vehicle and continued inching along the snow-covered road. As night fell, panic set in. While Emily was driving on a narrow stretch of road, her car slid into a ditch (沟). She tried to call for help but found no signal on her phone. Seeing no hope of immediate rescue, Emily decided to spend the night in her car. She wrapped herself in a blanket, waiting for morning. To stay warm, she ran her engine for a few minutes every now and then. Eventually, she fell asleep. Emily awoke to a gentle knock on her car window. Standing outside were Daniel and his wife Rachel, who noticed the stranded (被困的) vehicle on their way home and stopped to see if they could help. When Emily rolled down the window, Rachel asked if she was okay and told her it was not safe to stay overnight in the car. With genuine warmth in her voice, Rachel said they could take Emily to a nearby cafe they knew. Grateful and relieved, Emily accepted the offer. In the cafe, the couple bought Emily a hot chocolate and listened patiently as she explained her desperate situation: she was about a hundred miles from her destination, her car was completely stuck, and her entire holiday plan could be ruined. 注意: (1)续写词数应为150个左右。 (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. Three days later, Emily returned to get her car.
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One possible version: Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. Realizing the wisdom in their advice, Emily agreed without hesitation. The kind couple immediately drove her to the local station and even helped her purchase a ticket. Wrapped in their thick coats, Emily boarded the train, her heart filled with immense gratitude. Hours later, she finally arrived in Toronto. Walking onto the platform, she was instantly enveloped in her boyfriend’s tight embrace, tears of joy and relief welling up in her eyes as she recounted her perilous adventure and the heartwarming rescue by strangers. Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. The fierce storm had completely passed, leaving the streets blanketed in sparkling white snow. With the assistance of local police and tow truck drivers, her vehicle was successfully pulled out of the ditch. Holding a small gift box, Emily visited Daniel and Rachel’s home to express her heartfelt thanks. They smiled warmly, insisting that helping others was simply what neighbors do. This unforgettable experience taught Emily a profound lesson: while reckless love can lead to danger, the unexpected kindness of strangers can melt the coldest winter.

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【导语】本文以冬日遇险获救为线索展开,讲述艾米丽不顾暴雪预警驱车前往多伦多过圣诞,途中遭遇暴雪、车辆被困、手机无信号,陷入绝境,最终被好心夫妇丹尼尔和瑞秋救助,在陌生人的善意帮助下顺利抵达目的地、收获温暖与成长的故事。 1.段落续写: ①由第一段首句内容可知,第一段可描写艾米丽采纳夫妇的火车出行建议,二人热心送她乘车,她顺利抵达多伦多与男友团聚。 ②由第二段首句内容可知,第二段可描写风雪过后艾米丽回来取回车辆,登门致谢好心夫妇,感悟陌生人善意的珍贵。 2.续写线索:采纳建议——热心相助——乘车赶路——顺利团聚——返程取车——登门致谢——感悟善意 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①走上:walk onto /step onto ②表达:express /convey 情绪类 ①感激:gratitude/thankfulness ②欣喜:joy/elation/gladness 【点睛】[高分句型1] Wrapped in their thick coats, Emily boarded the train, her heart filled with immense gratitude.(运用了过去分词短语作状语以及独立主格结构作状语) [高分句型2] The fierce storm had completely passed, leaving the streets blanketed in sparkling white snow.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)

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